First I take it you live in the UK? Well anyways good job on the comady skit. I thought it was good. You need to be more random and have some type of story line to really get your spot on newgrounds. Good work man keep it up.
I'M AUSTRALIAN DAMIIT!!!!!!
FUCK YEAH MAN U HAD RAGE AGAINST THE MACHINE (GOD BLESS) AND DAMN THAT KICK ASS. i THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE A LAMER. TILL THE DAMN EXPLOTIONS AND MASS BATTLES. GOOOOOOD JOB PLEASE I BEG U MAKE MORE...PS UR PEOPLE ARE BUTT UGLY
Animation Touch Up
Alot of people may give your animation a hard time. I have to say it took you a long time heh. I'm glad that there is a DBZ fan out there. If you want I would love to help you out some. I'm a DBZ freak my self. :D
I can see ou put alot of time in to it. I fail to see where you put a dash of photoshop in it. But anyways. I thought the graphics was good, but I did not like how things keet on looping like crazy. And it almost seemed that you did not have a stable graphic style. Like how the hand closed. If you can do this, I know you can do better.
Tears of joy
It was really good and smooth. Good job. I would like to take this time and say that the final fight is not all about martial arts. And this animation that you made is a good old fastion fight. good work man.
Wow I'm just cracking. Omfg I'm so damn crying. That is just so damn funny. I wish you animte somethign where they fought.. haha! LETS GO LETS GET IT ON..okay.. okay..you ready
I have never seen a all out war like that with music that is embeded in it so well. Very very good. I have to say I'm impressed. The art work can use some touch up, but this is counter by how well you use this art work. I have to say I love your intro. Music was well thought about. Backrounds where great.
I have to say that your style is clean cut. You could of used more animation on the ships moving around to give it more a feel. And not the same animation over andover. But the idea how your main ships pulled out of hyperspace liek that was just great. That helped with the feel of the movie. Dont cut off in the middle of the song with the voice. Like how they talk in the middle of the battle to the presedent. Kinda killed it. This was well thought about. Over all good damn work. Your backround for stars...too many stars.
Im not here to diss your work. I'm just trying to help out. I loved it alot! Right now I'm threw some complcation my self with ships. If you check out my flash animation. I'm tring to go pastel which is hard. And use cell animation for how the people are made. You may want to do that. Easy, may take long.
Good job man and good work..(kinda curious let me know what you think about what I have said.)
On audio: Yes, true with the cutting out, but there was no comfortable medium between the two. Either you were focused on the music or the voices. Voices took priority.
On stars: Ever been to space? Lots more stars than you think.
On ships: Your ships are interesting, but only one of them stands out and that's your butterfly thingy. Your Beta thing is cool, but it's really slow and the amount of ship traffic really gets annoying while you're concentrating on opening credits.
Wow.. that was not only funny but it was also amazing. I could only imagine how long that matrix kick took ahha. very well done man.
It's like I dont want to give you a fully bad score but where is the rest of the animation haha. I like the music.
Uhm, I'm not sure if I should thank you or scould you.
Story that is powerful
Your the type of people that I have to admire. Your very moving and try to speak threw animation and something that is a slight main stream on the internet to get your voice out. I thought that going not forwards but backwards was just amazing. The story kept me on my feet woundering what happened. And it all started with hate and drinking. Drinking does kill off quite a bit of people. It's no way to go in life getting hit by another driver. It's unfair. You, you have really touched me with this animation. I gave you a 10 because not really because of the graphics or anything like that, but because of the story that you gave off. I'm a big believer of story's, art work in general. It's not a everything that we see such as something as what you have done with skill and elegents. You have really impressed me with this. I'm glad that I have watched it good job. Excellent job
is it okay some time in the future you and can work. I'm strongly talented in art. But I have not really submited anything. I gave off a beta to see how the public will act to it. check out at. One thing in newgrounds that they dont see is fine art. yeah...iknow it takes along time. But i know alot of people will love it. And I hope people get inspired to making something that they poured there heart out in.
I'm glad to see that there are people that really take some time to write good reviews like this. thank's a lot for your comments!
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