Rokei's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[blimpage - episode 02]

Comady

First I take it you live in the UK? Well anyways good job on the comady skit. I thought it was good. You need to be more random and have some type of story line to really get your spot on newgrounds. Good work man keep it up.

esspat responds:

I'M AUSTRALIAN DAMIIT!!!!!!

[Zero Wing: 2nd Anniv.]

The Idea

I have never seen a all out war like that with music that is embeded in it so well. Very very good. I have to say I'm impressed. The art work can use some touch up, but this is counter by how well you use this art work. I have to say I love your intro. Music was well thought about. Backrounds where great.

I have to say that your style is clean cut. You could of used more animation on the ships moving around to give it more a feel. And not the same animation over andover. But the idea how your main ships pulled out of hyperspace liek that was just great. That helped with the feel of the movie. Dont cut off in the middle of the song with the voice. Like how they talk in the middle of the battle to the presedent. Kinda killed it. This was well thought about. Over all good damn work. Your backround for stars...too many stars.
Im not here to diss your work. I'm just trying to help out. I loved it alot! Right now I'm threw some complcation my self with ships. If you check out my flash animation. I'm tring to go pastel which is hard. And use cell animation for how the people are made. You may want to do that. Easy, may take long.

Good job man and good work..(kinda curious let me know what you think about what I have said.)

TFX responds:

On audio: Yes, true with the cutting out, but there was no comfortable medium between the two. Either you were focused on the music or the voices. Voices took priority.

On stars: Ever been to space? Lots more stars than you think.

On ships: Your ships are interesting, but only one of them stands out and that's your butterfly thingy. Your Beta thing is cool, but it's really slow and the amount of ship traffic really gets annoying while you're concentrating on opening credits.

[RSFuture 4]

Over all

It's like I dont want to give you a fully bad score but where is the rest of the animation haha. I like the music.

Syrsly responds:

Uhm, I'm not sure if I should thank you or scould you.

[perish]

Story that is powerful

Your the type of people that I have to admire. Your very moving and try to speak threw animation and something that is a slight main stream on the internet to get your voice out. I thought that going not forwards but backwards was just amazing. The story kept me on my feet woundering what happened. And it all started with hate and drinking. Drinking does kill off quite a bit of people. It's no way to go in life getting hit by another driver. It's unfair. You, you have really touched me with this animation. I gave you a 10 because not really because of the graphics or anything like that, but because of the story that you gave off. I'm a big believer of story's, art work in general. It's not a everything that we see such as something as what you have done with skill and elegents. You have really impressed me with this. I'm glad that I have watched it good job. Excellent job

is it okay some time in the future you and can work. I'm strongly talented in art. But I have not really submited anything. I gave off a beta to see how the public will act to it. check out at. One thing in newgrounds that they dont see is fine art. yeah...iknow it takes along time. But i know alot of people will love it. And I hope people get inspired to making something that they poured there heart out in.

HeRetiK responds:

I'm glad to see that there are people that really take some time to write good reviews like this. thank's a lot for your comments!

[.:Last Resort:.]

A Wish

I really wish there were more people out there like you. You really presented a strong message even if you're graphics where shot. But it looked like you tried you're best. I have to admire you're talent. You can tell that you're heart and soul went in to that music video and it took up alot of time. I've been working on my for some time.
If there where more people out there to present such a strong message. Newgrounds would be a diffrent place. Good job. I can't believe how strong of a message that was. Very Very nice Adam. Good job.

adam-p89 responds:

Thanks a lot! :-D Those graphics were ok, but keep an eye out for my upcoming movie Spy Nes Reloaded, which is a remake/sequel (one or the other) of one of my first movies I made over a year ago. It includes highly detailed backgrounds (some of which I hand painted then scanned) and detailed, shaded characters. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you saw the message.. :)